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讀后續寫難得高分?一篇文章教你寫出漂亮的句子!

續寫中我們常常需要對人物的情緒進行描寫,有喜怒哀懼等等。大部同學都能將這些情緒用英文表達出來,但是卻往往描述的太籠統,不夠生動形象。

我們來看一個例子。

2018高考浙江卷讀后續寫:我和爸爸去騎馬,結果突然蹦出一只小兔子,馬兒受驚迷路,最后父子兩人回家的故事。我們來看某位同學描述馬兒受驚后的內心表現。

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. The 

horse was terrified and was out of my control. I was very scare-d. But luckily the horse slowed down and I was able to get off. Looking around, I was very confused. I didn’t know where I was.I felt very sad because I was lost.

 

這位同學用了be+adj/feel+adj.句型以及scared/sad/

terrfied 來描述自己內心的恐懼害怕悲傷。雖然也寫出了情緒,卻不夠生動飽滿。那么怎樣才能讓你的描寫更加生動呢?

讀后續寫難得高分?一篇文章教你寫出漂亮的句子!


細節描寫


一個小建議: 多進行細節描寫。思考一下,“我”害怕,害怕到了什么程度?“我”的眼睛怎樣,嘴巴怎樣,身體怎樣? 比較以下句子:

I was scared.

I was so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. (嗓子發緊,膝蓋發軟)

I felt very sad.

I felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.(被一股悲傷之感控制,忍不住哭泣)

當我們增加了一些小細節來描述一個人的感受的時候,我們的文章就變得豐滿起來,讀者讀起來也會更有畫面感。

讀后續寫難得高分?一篇文章教你寫出漂亮的句子!

情緒表達亮點句


總結續寫常用的情緒表達(建議大家背過,寫作的時候可以用到)

恐懼


 1) At the sight of the wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees   felt weak. (嗓子發緊,膝蓋發軟)

2At the sight of the wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.(嚇呆了,不敢動彈)

3At the sight of the wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. (被深深地恐懼感所控制,手心出汗)

4)I broke   out in a sudden cold sweat.嚇得冷汗直流

5)A shiver   runs down my back。 后背一陣寒戰。

6)He was   rooted to the spot 嚇得釘在地上,動彈不得。

7)In a   split second my heart seemed to leap from my body.心都快跳出來了

悲傷

1Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks. (心痛,眼淚直流)

1Upon hearing the bad news, she, numb with grief, had trouble speaking. (悲傷到失去知覺,不能開口說話)

2Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.(被一股悲傷之感控制,忍不住哭泣)

4She sobbed,   hiding her face in her hands.抽泣,用手掩住臉。

5Tears welled   up in her eyes.眼淚涌上它的雙眼。

   

喜悅

1) When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. (站到世界頂端,非常開心

2) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room. (眉開眼笑;笑容照亮房間)

3) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his eyes danced with joy and sweetness. (歡欣雀躍)

4He was wild   with joy欣喜若狂

5He was pleased   beyond description.高興地無法描述

憤怒

 

1) She felt so angry that she could feel her face burning.(臉上滾燙)

2) So angry was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face. (血液涌上臉頰)

3) what he did made my blood boil. 怒火中燒

4) His face was flushed with anger.氣得滿臉通紅


 

在英文寫作中我們常說有輸入才能有輸出,同學們想要寫出好的作品,必要的背誦是必不可少的。同時掌握續寫的技巧也同樣重要。今天我們學習了4種情緒的描寫方式,大家學會了嗎?


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